Can you check out this story i wrote? i put alat of time into remembering everything that happened that day, and it took a good 3 hours to write. So if you could give me any tips on what i should add take away. then that would be great, thanks.
I don’t care if you don’t believe me but this did in fact happen about 18 years ago.
at the time ages of people in story are Me= 17 Ashley=18 Marissa=16
They all were walking towards this hill that I had told them about.
“What’s so special about this hill Matt?” Ashley asked me. Ashley and me had been friends for a while, we had even dated once but that was just a one off thing in freshman year. We broke up, I never forgive myself for letting her get away from me. Now she was dating other guys. One of whom she is in love with and wanted him to take her virginity.
“It’s just really big, you can see for a few miles from it.” I said.
“So you and Tim used to come up and talk up there?” Marissa asked. Marissa is my little sister. We had grown up though, as if they were twins. Because we were only 13 months apart, the differences weren’t so great between us.
We got to the top of the hill and just sat there and rested for a moment. We just talked about a few miscellaneous things before Ashley called Marissa’s crush. They talked for a little while, I didn’t care, the guy was a good person and I knew him pretty well.
“Hey guys want to play a game?” Ashley asked.
“Sure” we both said.
“Ok. Then I raise you your shoes Matt” Ashley said, taking off both of her shoes.
“Oh ok. I see your shoes and I raise you your shoes and socks.” I said, taking off my shoes and socks.
“Come on join in Marissa!” Ashley said.
“Jonathan, let me call you back.” Marissa said, “So what am I supposed to do?”
“Just Take off your shoes and socks to begin with!” Ashley said.
“Ok.” Marissa said.
“I see your shoes and socks and raise you your shirt Ashley.” Marissa said, taking off her shirt.
“Ok” Ashley said, and took of her shirt, she had a black bra on. She was 4’11” and weighed about 97lbs and had great 34C boobs.
“I see your shirt and I raise you your bra.” I said, taking off my shirt.
“Ok.” Ashley said, finally releasing the boobs I had waited a long time to see.
“Ok guys, if a cop sees us up here then we’re screwed.” Ashley said. So we all moved to the back part of the hill where no one from the street down below could see us from. When we got there Ashley was still half naked.
“Ok I see your bra and I raise you your pants.” I said, taking off my pants.
“Ok, Marissa you have to take off your shirt and bra too.” Ashley said to Marissa. Ashley took off her pants, and had a Joe Boxer pink, yellow and green thong on. She had a great ass, mostly because none of the fat in her body went to her stomach, it just went to her ass. Ashley started to run around.
“Come guys do it wit me, its very liberating.” So I joined in with her, with only my underwear on too. I’m not an ugly guy, I have been with a few girls. None of which gave me any kind of sexual release. I’m 5’10” and about 167lbs. I’m no male model, but Ashley usually went for that kind of guy.
“I can’t do this anybody, just meet me at home OK?” Marissa said. Starting to walk away while putting her clothes on.
“Alright, be careful” I told her, still running with Ashley.
“Ok, I’m a little tired, lets rest.” Ashley said. Sitting down.
“Alright.” I said. Sitting down across from her.
“Matt, what is that on your leg?” Ashley asked him.
“What? Oh shit!” I said, it had been my cock that had stuck out from inside my boxer briefs.
“Oh wow!” Ashley had said under her breath, she thought that I hadn’t heard it. I pretended like I hadn’t. A long awkward silence plagued the next few moments as I was trying to decide what to do when Ashley said.
“Well we’re still playing, so I see your pants and raise you your underwear.” Taking off her underwear to reveal a clean saden pussy. She was a virgin and had the best looking pussy I had seen. Even if the only ones I have seen were in porn on the internet.
“Alright” I said nervously and he removed my underwear to reveal a 10inch cock. That was solid as a rock.
“Oh my god Matt, you have the biggest dick I’ve ever seen!” she said. Staring at it.
“Thanks, but I thought you said that Zach had a big dick too?” I asked her, also staring at her boobs and pussy.
“Not as big, or thick, as yours!” she said getting a little bit closer.
“Thanks!” I said.
“Can I touch it?” she asked.
“Only if I get to touch your boobs and pussy.” I said.
“Alright” she said. Getting down on he knees and looking at it. She touched it and it twitched a bit. She started to move her hand slowly up and down it, looking up at me. She started to massage my balls as she licked the lengthh of it. I couldn’t stand it so I let out a groan as she did this, and she looked up at me and smiled, still jerking me off. Then she put my cock in her mouth, taking a bit at a time. She had told me her gag reflex didn’t work anymore, but I was going to put it to the test. She started to take more and more of my cock in her mouth. I felt it hit the back of her throat a few times. I could barely stand it, I was using all of my will to not cum too soon. Then she stopped I looked at her and she said.
“Your turn.”
I got the message and had her lay down. I examined her pussy for just a second before plunging my face into it. Ashley started to understand around from the pleasure. When I started sucking on her clip is when she lost it, she let out a loud moan.
“Don’t ever stop! Oh my god!” she said. Pushing his face into her pussy by the hair, I reached up and started playing with her boobs, moving her nipples in between my fingers. She was writing around in intense pleasure,back arching and moans coming from her. Then as she came she let out a scream.
“We can’t do this here.” I told her “We have to go back to my dad’s house.”
“Alright, lets get dressed and go.” she said. When we started to walk back she did something I didn’t expect out of her. She grabbed my hand and held it. Like she did when we were going out. This made me the happiest person alive. When we got back to my dads place Marissa asked us where we had been. We made up some excuse like the cops had been driving by so we had to wait until the left for sure. She said ok and we all went to my room. We spent the next few hours just talking and hanging out. Then at 0300 my step mom came in and said we should go to bed. So Marissa and Ashley went back to Marissa’s room and I stayed in mine. Thinking about how this was going to work out. Then at about 03:30 Ashley came back into my room and closed the door. I was half sleep so I didn’t notice it. She climbed into my bed and looked at me for a moment.(I was awake by now and looking back). Then she got closer and closer, then she just stuck he tongue down my throat and we just started making out. After a few minutes of that she said
“I never knew you could get hurt out from just making out.” By now my cock was rock hard again. Then she took of her clothes until she was in only the thong I mentioned earlier and said.
“Let me finish what I started earlier.” and took my underwear off(that’s all I wear to bed) and started sucking my dick again. This was great, the girl of my dreams giving me the greatest pleasure of my life. She tried to deep throat me a few times. But she always would cought and have to breath again. She sucked my balls as she kept jerking my shake.
“I’m gonna cum!” I said. She put my cock back in her mouth, and with a groan I shot the largest load that I had ever shot. She swallowed it all. And came back up and we kissed a bit more. After a minute I decided that I would return the favoragain. And went back to that sweet virgin pussy. I started by sucking on her clip which drive her mad but I told her she couldn’t make much noise or else my dad would wake. She put a pillow over her face. Though I could still kind’ve heard her muffled moans. After a minute I stuck a finger in her ass which drive her absolutely crazy. I could tell she wanted to scream, but couldn’t for fear of waking my dad/step mom. I just kept licking her pussy sucking on her clip and what not until she asked;
“Fuck me! Right now!”
“Are you sure?” I asked her.
“Yes!” she said. So I positioned my cock right at her pussy. I took one more look at here as I eased it into her. She was writing from a combination of pain and pleasure. After a minute I started to move my cock in and out a little faster. I moved faster and faster until we were both groaning and moaning from the pleasure. After a few minutes I said;
“I’m gonna cum!:
“Me too” she said. And with a final thrust I shot another huge load into here as she orgasmed along with me. Afterwards I took my dick out of her and looked at her.
“I love you” she said.
“I love you too” I replied.
Things were never the same between us. Me and Ashley shared a very healthy relationship. She never really had in interest in other guys after that day. And I owe it all to that hill, the hill that somehow brought all those feelings out.
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