The Party

My first story Please comment on how to improve.

Kayleigh looked out from the window. Her brother’s friends were still arriving for the party. Why, why couldn’t she go to the party! It was so unfair having to sit in her room while the others were having fun downstairs!
Suddenly, she saw a couple coming up the driveway in their open car. It was her crush, Jake, with another girl. The girl was strikingly beautiful, and looked about Kayleigh’s age. Kayleigh was turned on by her sight. “I wonder who that girl is,” she thought.
As soon as she saw the couple enter the house, she ran downstairs. On her way she bumped into her brother’s friend, James. James was fond of Kay, but she didn’t like James at all. Kay asked James, “Do you know who that girl is?” and pointed towards the two. “That’s Jake’s cousin, Gloria,” he answered. Kay muttered a little thanks and ran to her brotherr.
“Hey, look, I’m up in my room, don’t let anyone come there. If you do, then you’ll be dead by tomorrow,” she threatened her brother. “Oh, I’m sure nobody would want to come to your rotten room,” her brother laughed. Kay made a face at him and went upstairs, keeping an eye at Gloria.
Gloria had seen Kay watching her. She also saw Kay going upstairs, but didn’t follow her. She decided to go up and talk to Kay, later.
Kay got upstairs and switched on her DVD player. She inserted a DVD and played it. It was a porn DVD, showing a guy and two girls, all teens, having some fun.
The guy thrusted his long and thick cock into one of the girls’ love hole, and then pulled it out. Then he started pumping it in and out.
“Fuck me! YEAH, LIKE THAT BABY!!!” the girl, who was a blonde, moaned.
The other licked the blonde’s asshole while the blonde got fucked. After lots of action, the guy cummed, andso did the blonde.
Kay pressed the forward button. The next clip was sexier than the one before.
Three gorgeous naked girls were making out. Two of them kissed luxury, while the third licked both their psies.
Kay unbuttoned her shirt slowly and pulled it off.
The girls on the screen were fondling each other’s boobs and licking psies. Juices streamed out and were licked in a trance.
Kay pulled off her bra, and, now topless, slowly removed all her clothes. The erotic clip continued, with the girls fingering and licking vigorously.
Kay started rubbing her clip gently, and moaned with pleasure. She took occasional licks of her fingers to taste her heavenly juices.
The girls on the screen were now using vibrators and dildos.
Soon, she reached orgasm, and the girls on the screen cummed as well.
Kay felt pleased with herself. She had finally achieved orgasm. She felt horny and pleased with herself.
Suddenly, she heard a knock on the door. She did not put on her clothes, and ran to the door. She opened it, and saw Gloria standing at the door.
Gloria’s mouth hung as she saw Kay naked. Kay had a hot, sealed body, and anyone could fall in love with her asset.
Kay was alarmed to see Gloria. She ran inside the bathroom. Gloria entered the room and bolted the door.
Kay had heard the sound of the door being bolted. She told. She was not going to go out.
Gloria walked around the room, looking at the remains of Kay’s exploration. She noticed the porn on the DVD screen, and smiled. She stripped naked, went to the bathroom door, and whispered, “Come out babe, don’t be shy. You’re gorgeous.” Kay hesitated, but finally, opened the door, and saw Gloria naked. She was instantly turned on.
“You want to lick me?” Gloria asked Kay in a sensitive voice.
“OH FUCKING YES!!” Kay screamed.
Gloria pulled Kay in an embrace and they kissedEach other. Their tongues travelled in each other’s mouth and when they met, Kay felt slight heat going up her body.
Gloria slowly stopped kissing Kay’s lips and started licking and nibbling her neck. It was a beautiful feeling and Kay felt the pleasure already building up in her. While Gloria kissed and licked Kay, Kay started rubbing Gloria’s nipples. She had big boobs, and puffy nipples. Kay pinched her nipples and felt that they were becoming harder.
Gloria started going down to Kay’s boobs, and started sucking and biting them gently. “Oooh, that’s great baby!” Kay moaned. Slowly, Gloria went down to Kay’s privates. Kay sensed her intentions and lay down on the cum-soaked bed with her legs spread wide. Gloria smiled, and licked the inside of Kay’s thighs, slowly going up to the hole. She reached her clip and started licking her pussy, almost like an expert. Kay was filled with pleasure. It almost felt like a mini-cock going up her pussy.
Suddenly, someone knocked at the door. Kay ran to the bathroom. But Gloria fearlessly (or maybe shamelessly ) went to the door and opened it. Her brother, Jake, stood there. “You’ve been trying your tricks on Kay, right? I would have loved to as well, but I won’t, because I’m not as dumb as you. Just get a life,” he said, without realising that Kay was able to hear everything he said. Kay opened the bathroom door, and came to a horrified Jake. “Well, if you want to try your tricks on me, come on in!” she said.
Jake stood outside, agape. Gloria pulled him inside and shut the door.
“Let’s get the real party started!” Kay shouted.
Jake understands what was up and took off his clothes. He had a great body, with amazing abs. When he took off his last clothes, the girls were able to see his huge cock. It was beautifully shaped, thick, large and simply wonderful.
Kay asked him, “Wanna get a blowjob, sexy?”
“Sure!” Jake said.
The three of them lay on the bed in a circular position. Kay licked Jake’s cock, Jake licked Gloria’s pussy, and Gloria licked Kay’s pussy.
Kay sensitively licked the shake of Jake’s cock, and stroked his balls with her hand. Then she started sucking his cock and swiveling her tongue around it.
“That feels great,” Jake groaned.
Gloria was experiencing great pleasure too. Jake sure know how eat out sluts. His tongue moved around her clip, causing her immense pleasure.
Suddenly, Jake stopped licking Gloria and got up. “This isn’t fun,” he said, “I want to fuck you babes!”
“Sure, you can,” both of the girls said.
“Kay first,” Jake said. Kay went to the study table, sat on an edge, and spread her legs. Jake thrusted his cock into her pussy.
A stream of juices came out. Gloria ran and licked up all the juices. She thenwent to the bed and started wanking herself with a large vibrator.
Jake thrusted his cock in and out of Kay’s pussy. She moaned with pleasure. Gloria watched them as the vibrator buzzed.
Jake’s cock went deep inside Kay’s tight pussy. Gloria reached orgasm and cummed all around the room. She then climbed the table, went to the edge, and almost sat on Kay’s face.
“Taste my cum, dear,” she whispered in Kay’s ear. Kay licked up all the cum left in Gloria’s pussy and gave it a lick before Gloria went down on her knees.
Gloria then kissed Kay, her tongue met with Kay’s, and licked Kay’s tongue. It still had cum on it, and tasted rather nice with a cock’s taste and cum mixed together.
Jake was about to cum. He pulled out his cock from Kay’s pussy and, without thinking, thrust it into Gloria’s pussy, who was about to wank herself again. Kay came to Gloria and sucked her boobs, while Gloria tried tokiss Jake. Kay picked up a dildo and fucked herself with it.
Soon, they all cummed. White streams flew in the air and the three tried to lick them up. Jake cummed in Gloria’s love hole, and she felt a hot stream gushing up her body. Everything was licked up soon. Gloria got dressed up, and so did Jake.
“We need to leave now,” Jake said, embracing Kay, and fingering her pussy with his left hand.
“We’ll do this again sometimes,” Gloria said.
Then they left.
Kay had certainly enjoyed the party, even though she didn’t attend it!