Aloha,
I just finished writing my first sex stories.
I like it very much. I need your opinions. Do you like it?
Should I make more of this?
Feel free to give me some advice! I could use some help with it.
Well here it is:
Introduction:
Alicia
22 years old
She is a knockout blond hair perfect body.
Only she has been a superbitch to peter as long as he knew her.
She lives together with her boyfriend for about 3 years.
Peter
27 years old
Average looking guy. Kinda like the boy next door
He is single because he has a problem with commitment.
He secretly wants Alicia because of her hotness but hates her personality
He is shy but very smart.
(This is my first story i write so please tell me what you think of it.)
(Sorry for maybe the bad english but I’m Dutch and its also my first story in Englishsh.)
There he was in her house. The girl who was absolutely breathtaking.
It was saturday night and he was invited with his friends for a party at her house.
He didn’t like her but was convinced by his friends to join them at her house.
as usual she and her loser boyfriend where making fun of him. He was thinking one day I will get you for this.
He never knew this night he was going to get even with her.
Suddenly she said I have to go to the toilet, so she went upstairs to go take a piss. Their toilet was on the 1st floor right next to their bedroom.
After 10 minutes she still wasn’t back and from all the beer he was gonna need a piss too.
So he exhausted himself and walked upstairs to the bathroom.
When he arrived upstairs he went straight to the toilet and started to piss.
When he was done he flushed the toilet washed his hands and started walkingback.
The it occurred to him that alicia was no longer here, so he automatically thought she must be back with his friends.
He was just thinking about going back downstairs when he heard moaning in the bedroom.
Curious as he was he opened very quit the bedroom door and peeked through de door.
He could not believe what he saw!
There she was alicia naked on the bed fingering herself an moaning fuck me fuck me!!
She must have been getting very horny from all the drinking and needed a relief.
Fortunatly he had his cell phone with him which included a camera so he started making pictures of her.
He even made a small film on his cellphone. When he was done filming it he stuffed his cellphone in his jeans and opened the door.
In an instant moment their eyes met and alicia saw him looking at her with a big grin on his face.
GET OUT YOU PERVERT SHE SAID!!!
I don’t think so, looks like you enjoying yourself. And I have these photo’s en this video to prove it.
Unless you do what I say I will send these foto’s to all my friends and put them on the internet so that everyone you know can see what a dirty slut you are!!
You wouldn’t do that to me do you said Alicia. I’m sorry I’ve been such a bitch, I will be nice from now on.
No you had your chance and you blew it. Now its time for payback. Now I saw you getting yourself off and I liked the view so I suggest you continue where you left off. Give me some nice views of you wet slutty pussy you stupid whore.
No I don’t!!! you pervert. Well your choice said Peter then he grabbed his cell phone and started typing numbers to send the pictures.
What are you doing said Alicia? What do you think I’m doing alicia? Getting ready to send the pictures.
Please no don’t do it said alicia this time in fear. Are you gonna do what I say then Alicia.
She knew he had her so she had no other way to go on with it. Ok Ok I ‘ll do anything.
Fine then Start fingerprinting and get yourself off and give me a good show or you know what will happen.
She started putting one finger in and out of her dripping pussy. She thought if I do it quick and make myself cum fast it will be over very soon. So she started unwilingly sticking 2 more vingers in her pussy and keep doing it faster and faster in her now sopping cunt. She was so worked up that she didn’t noticed that peter stripped himself of his clothes and was standing naked before her slowly stroking his 7.87 inch hard throbbing cock.
Then he said: Alicia sit on the bed and suck my cock. And no tricks because you know what else happens…
So no teeth and give me a blowjob like I am your boyfriend.
So sheput his dick in his mouth and started slowly sucking his cock. Peter laughed and said Look at it you little whore you loving it. And he started making photo’s again.. Now you little slut have you ever been facefucked?
So peter grabbed her head and started fucking her like a maniac. For 10 minutes he fucked her lungs out of her body only letting her go to gag or breath.How do you like that slut. Tell me you are my little cockslut tel me he yelled.
I am… I am your whose my master she yelled in fear but in the same time she also was a little excited. She was never been dominatad that much by a man. Her boyfriend was not into that and only wanted to make love.
Now get on your hands and knees and get whats cumming to you!!!
She did and she was only just in position when she felt him impaling her like a madman.
Peter was in heaven, he always wanted her and now he had her and he could let her do anything he couldthink of.
She was his slave now.
So he started pumping in and out of her giving her every frustration and anger he had in him on her cunt.
In the meantime alicia was getting so aroused that she started fucking back like crazy. She was on the verge of cumming. Suddenly she came like a guyser and squirted over his entire dick. They were smoking like crazy because of the wild animalistic fuck. He fucked her for a good 10 minutes in all kind of positions and she was tamed.
She was his to own now.
Right after her 3 orgasm Peter felt his dick swellll and knew he was about to cum. So he pulled out and commanded Alicia to sit back on the bed.
Now I am gonna cum and I want you to swallow it all. You are a dirty little slut and I am your master so do it.
Now open your mouth slut!!
Alicia opened her mouth and Peter started jerking in her mouth. Then he came and he spurted his cum in her mouth.
Don’t spill anything he said.
When he was done he said leave it in you mouth now and open your mouth!!
She did and Peter made his final foto’s from her slutty cum hungry mouth.
Ok now swallow. She did and nearly voided. Peter laughed and said: Don’t like the taste well get used to it because you will do it a lot more.
Oh and four your information during our fuck I have been making foto’s too. So I own you know.
Your boyfriend is maybe your lover, but you are my slave now.
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