Let me know what you think……

ok, so here is the start of a story i decided to write. I know the grammer sux, the puncutation and the spelling no good, i know. but let me know if you think the story line is OK.

Im not much for being an adventurous person. I like to stick to what i know. Crazy things dont usually happen to me, especially when it comes to love, sex and relationships. I was never expecting the day Amanda and Steve came up to me at work. I thought they made a very cute couple, they both looked so happy and amanda was gorgeous. She caught my eye. I couldnt help but to admire her perfect body. I got lost in my own fantacy’s as i took their order. Taking orders at a fast food joint isnt the best but you do get to meet a lot of people. I think amanda caught on to the fact that i was admiring her, she giggled once when I glanced down at her chest. Steve was clueless of what was going on. I smiled at amanda when she caught me checking her out, a sort of “guilty” smile. After they finished ordering they walked off to find a table to sit at, i admired amanda’s perfect ass as she walked away.
Can i go on my break??? I asked Chris my manager. Sure, he told me. I walked out with a soda and sat at a table across the room from amanda and steve. I wasnt really paying any attention to them anymore, i was more focused on my friend who i was talking to on the phone. A couple minutes later i heard a voice clear her throat, “uhmmm hmm!” I looked up and saw amanda.
“Um, Hi?” i said sort of confused.
“Can we join you???” she asked me with a cute smile on her face.
“sure.” i said not wanting to say no.
“My boyfriend and i were talking and i told him how you were checking me out, I thought it was cute of you. We were wondering if you would be inspired in maybe a threesome???”
My jaw dropped and hit the floor. “Am i dreaming?!?!" i aked her.
“No silly!” she laughed.
“Well, if thats a serious question then hell yes!!!” i said.
“Okay, great! Well lets get to know each other some!”
We all began to talk and my hour break flew by. I had to go back to work but I only had a couple hours left of my shift. They agreed’d to stick around till i got out. Once i got off of work Steve drive us to my house so i could shower and change my clothes. I didn’t like the idea of ​​smelling like taco’s when i was going to have my first threesome! Steve and amanda waited downstairs as I showed. I told them that nothing could go down at my house because of my younger siblings and also because of the fact it was my parents house. They didnt mind. They said we would go to their apartment. After i got done changing we headed out. I told my parents i would be out for the night and not to wait up for me. We headed to Amanda’s apartment. The wholeway we talked and got to know each other.
“So you have never been with a girl Amanda???” i asked her, wanting to know about her expierences.
“No i haven’t. I am very curious though. I have always found the idea of ​​a girl eating me out as an extreme turn on!”
“Well, thats a good start! How about you steve? What do you think about this whole thing?”
“Um, its OK i guess. I am really doing this for Amanda. I know she wants to try this out and you seem like a really cool person, so how many people have you been with? I mean, how many girls?”
“Well i have been with two girls but four guys. Two of the guys countless times. I am more into girls now though, i absolute love pussy! I love making her scream my name.” i said with a huge grin on my face.
I noticed Amanda fidget a bit in the front seat. I was hoping she was gettin as turned on as i was. I love to go down and find a nice wett pussy to lick up. We arrived at their apartment not too much later. We all headed Up to their room and sat in the living room talking about past sexual expierences. There is no better way to get going then to talk about sex! Steve was telling me about past times with Amanda. I was supposed by how hott their sex seemed to always be, it was a major turn on. Amanda was gorgeous and I couldn’t keep my eyes off of her. I kept admiring her long legs, her skin looked like silk and i just wanted to kiss every inch of her. I knew, all i had to do was patient and i would get it, i would be able to do all of that, kiss every inch of her and give her the best orgasum as possible. I was very confident with my skills, and I felt extremely comfortable with Amanda and Steve. Both of them were very down to earth and i looked forward to getting them in bed. After about three hours of talking the conversation took itself to the bedroom.
“so you have never kissed a girl Amanda???”
“Um, no.” she told me.
I leaned in and kissed her softly. Kissing a girl is like nothing else. You can kiss a guy but kissing him is so rough, kissing a girl is so soft,her smooth lips against yours the feeling is just totally different. The second our lips touched i felt a spark between my legs, i was growing hotter. I kissed her again, this time with more force, Pushing gently on her lips wile cupping her chin with my hand. The next kiss i slid my tounge into her mouth, she did the same, our tounges dance for a few moments then returned to our own mouths. We broke apart for a few seconds only to want more. I kissed her again and again, soft kisses, alternative tounge then no tounge. The last kiss, i kissed her firmly then took her bottom lip into my mouth and sucked it gently, she let out a moan as i did this. I kissed her again, Then kissed down to her neck. I stopped at her neck and sucked it softly then moved up to her ear and wispered,
“Im so wett for you”
I moved my lips along her ear, just brushing them together then i breathed hard in her ear. I returned to her neck and kissed her. My hand had gone wandering down to her thighs. I kissed her on the lips again, gently, just as i did that i ran my finger up the slit of her pussy. My hand had found its way up her skirt, lucky me, she wasnt wearing any underwear.

let me know so i can improve it!!!
 

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