Wrong Ending

Hi everyone,
Below is the comment that we have added to our latest story. We apologise for the wrong ending that we wrote, this was because we let our emotional state, caused by losing contact with Lisa for so long, rule our brains. So we ended up putting all the emotional stress we had into the story, which we can now see was very wrong.
Lisa read the story yesterday (25th Oct) and said that she did not like the ending. We trust and value her opinion as, she has helped so much in making the series enjoyable, also Lisa has provided so much help on character direction, plot lines also sex scenario’s.
We are re-writing the last part, with Lisa’s help and we trust that you will enjoy this ending better…

Thanks for the comments. after reading them and also having a long chat with lisa, who at last we have replaced contact with. we realize that this is not the right ending for the story. we are big enough to accept when something we have done is not right. we are also big enough to admit our mistake, and then correct it. this is what we are doing. with lisa’s help we are re-writing the story ending and this will not include a hospital scene in any shape or form. please be patient with us, as contact with lisa is very limited at the moment, and she is helping us the best she can in creating a better story ending for you all to enjoy. once again thanks for your comments. as these, combined with lisa’s comments have made us realise where we went wrong.